exciting a soccer game

Human being has invented a lot of sports. And people in the world play a lot of sport games. However, a soccer game is one of the most exciting and meaningful sport with passion ever invented. A soccer game is two teams of 11 players trying to kick and head a ball into the opponents’ goal; players cannot use their hands. There are national teams and club teams in every country. A soccer game has amazing players, including power and fun, and unique styles. First of all, every team has unique styles. Most of people think soccer is simple. But, it is not standardized. Some of teams are powerfully aggressive, some of teams are extreme defensive; those style will change the concepts and result. For example, there is Spain and Brazil team. Both of team is aggressive team, but Spain team respects passing game; Brazil team compliments dribbling. It shows playing style up; it is different.
Secondly, a soccer game reflects energetic. Players will run during the match. Therefore, they have to work out enough. It is so powerful. When players try to get the ball, they will do shoulder charges and tackles. It is dangerous, but it shows up man’s power. In addition, a soccer game gives us tension and happiness. During watch a soccer game, we cannot get rid of our eyes from matching game. As player makes a goal, we will be excitement and feel tension. For example, if you have own team, you might cheer your team up. When your team gets a goal, you will shout and be happy. At the time, you know the feeling and emotions.
Furthermore, there is more important thing to enjoy a soccer game that is players. Each team has incredible player who could change the game and history. Diego Maradona, for example, was amazing player who had nicely skill. He knew how could make the goal wherever he was; he was in national team and won the world cup. In addition, there is Messi who is FC Barcelona club player, recently. He has dribbling skill. When he was dribbling, no one could get the ball from him. As he dribbles, we might see amazing angel’s dancing. Also, he is so genius. If players try to cover him, he knows how can use their team members. His moving and action are one of the wonderful performances. You will love him.
A soccer game has symbolical style, powerful and energetic, and amazing players.

travel in Japan

A lot of people like to travel, when they have extra money and time. Some countries are not safe places to go. However, Japan is one of the country people should visit. The vast amount of culture and history to explore in Kyoto is quite amazing. It is a place to show the Japanese soul and see how the Japan develops. To visit Japan, the people can feel very safe, even go shopping at night. If you get lost, people are willing to help you. Therefore, for safe and cultures reason, people should visit Japan.
First of all, the capital of Japan for more than thousand years, Kyoto is full of the classic image of Japan: streets of traditional wooden houses, temple pagodas surrounded by cherry blossom trees, and people who wear traditional clothes (Kimono) walk on paving stone. People can enjoy culture and history to explore in Japan. However, people also can see the modern urban life and get nice service experience in Japan. Japan is one of the most development countries in the world. Higher building, subway, high technology and fashion style- all present modern life in Japan. Urban and country, natural and technology, people who visit Japan are not only enjoying culture and history experience, but also modern life.
In addition, there is no "complete safety" anywhere in the world, even in your own home, but you can say the crime rate of Japan is lower than that of many other countries in the world. For example, when I went to Japan, I can walk around at night pretty much anywhere in Tokyo with the knowledge that I will be safe. I wouldn't walk through parks at midnight by myself but I would probably be safer doing that here than just about anywhere else in the world. The crime rate is low in Japan, but things do happen. People should remember they are in Japan and maybe be aware that their behavior may be misread.
Furthermore, people could have nice food and get good service in Japan. When I visited Japan, I enjoyed the nice food and nice customer service every day. The most places such as restaurant, shopping mall and public restroom are clean. When people go shopping, the clerks always serve the customers in patient and polite way. If people get lost in Japan, most of times you can get help without worry. Therefore, Japan is a nice country to visit, because of nice food, good service and friendly people.
To sum up, Japan is one of the country people should visit. Thousand years history mix with modern life created an amazing country. People visit Japan not only can explore the culture and history, but also enjoy city life. Also, the foreigner can get comfortable shopping environment in Japan. Most Japanese are friendly, if people need help, even they cannot speak English, and they would find someone to help you. Finally, compare to other country, Japan is a safe place to travel. Even a woman foreigner travel alone, it is a safe place to stay. Those reasons show that the people should travel in Japan and have good experiences in Japan.

(Rewrite) The Band of Brothers

We have a lot of World War movies and Television series. Most of movies and TV series just show action and bloodthirsty violence up. Yet The Band of Brothers is the best World War 2 TV series that I have ever seen; in fact, I could feel soldier’s emotions. The Band of brothers describes War’s sadness, tragedy, and love. It also depicts the experiences of Easy Company of the 2nd Battalion, 506th Infantry Regiment assigned to the 101st Airborne Division of the United States Army. The series covers Easy Company’s basic training at Toccoa, Georgia, as they train for Operation Market Garden, and the Battle of Bastogne through the end of the war. There are good background music, amazing scenes, and compelling stories.
First of all, the band of brothers’ music is wonderful. The main theme, for example, we might feel friendship and love. It is warm and pretty soft when we listen to the main theme. We seem to be in our home. In addition, the second section of the music (Suite No.1) is powerful and activated. It describes dynamic power of brave soldiers. While listening to the music, one might feel the reality with of battle. And, finale of the swan music describes War’s sorrows, deaths and failures. During the battle, soldiers watched many friends die; survivor soldiers felt bad and sorry for them.
Secondly, there are incredible scenes. These scenes make the viewer’s experience the same sensation of the soldiers. For instance, a good scene is the scene at Bastogne in Central Europe. This scene shows the beauty of nature in the winter time with snow covered forest. The cold represents the human’s heart and mind. On the other hand, during the battle, when the blood covers snow, it represents warm’s humanity. We should love each other. It also indicates our mind because we have dual nature of good and evil. Also, a scene in the cities was very peaceful and important. Most of cities looked comfortable and cozy. Because there were a lot of memories of families, I think, director wanted to remind viewers about stability of home. Thus, D-Day was my favorite part of the sires. When soldiers tried to get in the airplane, everything was dark and silent. It seems to be the calm before the storm. I suppose, dark and silence inside the airplane foreshadows the battle to come. It makes viewer feel tension and involved in the war.
Furthermore, amazing scenes are harmonious with compelling stories. The scenes at Bastogne, for example, Easy Company went near Germany, despite shortages of food, ammunition, winter clothing and the medic. Eugene Roe, who does not have the necessary medical supplies to properly treat the men, met a kindly nurse. They did fall in love with each other, but they had never spoken their feeling. During the battle, Germany attacked paths of the allied forces; the nurse was killed by bomb at the time. Moreover, as Easy Company enters Germany itself, they find themselves confronted with the horrors of the holocaust when members of Easy Company across a Nazi concentration camp. The allied forces would think why we fight and why we are against Nazi. And soldiers would ask viewers to understand their stories. As a result, the band of brothers shows the pain of war, tragedy, and impresses up us.
In conclusion, the amazing scenes, compelling stories, and background music helps show the viewers the pain and tragedy of war, impressing this upon us. The music is warm and soft, powerful and activated. Also, the scenes show warmth of humanity and dual nature of good and evil. In addition the stories tell us about falling in love during the chaos in the battle. Those reasons make me feel soldiers’ emotion and get involved with them. This is why I watch the TV series.

The band of brothers

We have a lot of World War movies and Television sires. Most of movies and TV sires just show action and bloodthirsty violence up. Yet the band of brothers is the best World War 2 TV sires that I have ever seen; in fact, I could feel soldier’s emotions. The Band of brothers describes War’s sadness, tragedy, and love. It also depicts the experiences of Easy Company of the 2nd Battalion, 506th Infantry Regiment assigned to the 101st Airborne Division of the United States Army. The series covers Easy Company’s basic training at Toccoa, Georgia, as they train for Operation Market Garden, and the Battle of Bastogne through the end of the war. There are amazing scenes, compelling stories, and good background music. First of all, the band of brothers’ music is wonderful. The main theme, for example, we might feel friendship and love. It is warm and pretty soft when we listen to the main theme. We seem to be in our home. In addition, the second section of the music (Suite No.1) is powerful and activated. It describes dynamic power of brave soldiers. While listen to the music, one might feel the reality with of battle. And, finale of the swan music describes War’s sorrows, deaths and failures. During the battle, soldiers watched many friends die; survivor soldiers felt bad and sorry to them.
Secondly, there are incredible scenes. These scenes make the viewer experience the same sensation of the soldiers. For instance, a good scene is the scene at Bastogne in Central Europe. This scene shows the beauty of nature in the winter time with snow covered forest. The cold represents the human’s heart and mind. On the other hand, during the battle, when the blood covers snow, it represents warm’s humanity. We should love each other. It also indicates our mind because we have dual nature of good and evil. Also, a scene in the cities was very peaceful and important. Most of cities looked comfortable and cozy. Because there were a lot of memories of families, I think, director wanted to remind viewers about stability of home. Thus, D-Days was my favorite part of the sires. When soldiers tried to get in the airplane, everything was dark and silence. It seems to be calm before the storm. I suppose, dark and silence inside airplane foreshadows the battle to come. It makes viewer to feel tension and involve to war.
Furthermore, amazing scenes are harmonious with compelling stories. Scene at Bastogne, for example, Easy Company went to near Germany, despite shortages of food, ammunition, winter clothing and the medic, Eugene Roe, who does not have the necessary medical supplies to properly treat the men, met a kindly nurse. They did fall in love each other, but they had never spoken their feeling. During the battle, Germany attacked paths of the allied forces; a nurse was killed by bomb at the time. Moreover, as Easy Company enters Germany itself, they find themselves confronted with the horrors of the holocaust when members of Easy Company stumble across a Nazi concentration camp. The allied forces would think why we fight and why we are against with Nazi. And soldiers would ask viewer to understand their story. As a result, the band of brothers shows the pain of war, tragedy, and impresses us.

Olympic Games

Markfox01 talks about Winter Olympic Games. Markfox01 thought that Winter Olympic Games waste money and time. His theology said that Olympic is not entertainment any more. However, I believe that Olympic is really fun, interesting, proud, patriotic, and effect of economy. First of all, Olympic has always intrigued me. There are a lot of games, such as Short track speed skating, snowboard, and figure skating. For example, Short track speed skating is really speedy game I have ever seen. They try to race a few track, but it makes that I feel pressure and exciting. In addition, Short track speed skating rules are really strict. For instance, if you touch your competition during race, referee will give you disqualification. Also, you have to follow the line and cannot touch the line. All of the rules make intensive for players and watchers. Secondly, we could have learned hope in the Olympics. In order to become a winner, a huge effort is needed. For example, there is Yuen ah Kim who is figure skating player. Yuen ah has been practicing skating for Olympic since when she was 14 years old. She usually practices more than 12 hours every single second; she has had a lot of injures. However, even if she has injured during the Olympic, she won and got the gold medal.

Rewrite (Video games)

People believe that video games have a good influence on children’s behavior. Yet video games cause bad behavior; video games are unhealthy for their bodies, limit their social life, and increase their aggressiveness. First of all, video games have bad effects on children’s health. Children may spend less time on their activities, such as sports and exercises. For example, children become obese and develop skeletal disorders because they do not have enough exercise. Secondly, too much video game playing makes children isolated. Children may not have time for other activities, such as reading, talking with family and friends, and doing homework. Also, children might not study at home. Even if they are in school, they might think about playing games all the time. They could not focus on their studies. So they would get a poor grade in school.
Furthermore, the effect on children's health and their increased isolation are not the only effect of video game abuse. There is also an effect on critical thinking ability. This means video games may be more conducive to children’s aggression than obedience; children who play more violent video games are more likely to have increased aggressive thoughts and feelings. They could confuse reality and fantasy. They might watch people with anger, sadness, and fear. It could cause killings, shootings, and stabbing. Also, they may not respect people. For example, when playing games, they could pick up bad language. So they would use bad words when they talk to others. Eventually, video games could cause children’s bad behavior and negative thoughts.

Interpreting Music

When I listen to classical music, I often times had a hard time understanding the music. Their musical philosophy seems to be very deep for me to fully appreciate it, yet somehow the magical sound draws me to the world of classical music. First of all, when I listen to the music that is done by worldly famous players, the music easily flows out with simple expressions of feelings. For example, when I try to express some feelings through music, it seems it is very complicated to do so. Yet, when I listen to the music that is done by famous players, I would understand more easily. Secondly, the author emphasizes the simplicity in interpreting music. I totally agree with his opinion. Much classical music is very long compared to other types of music. And that is why many people feel bored listening to the music. However, once you understand its simplicity in expressing composer’s and player’s emotion, the music is not boring anymore.
Furthermore, understanding on music by famous musician and emphasizing the simplicity are not only interpreting music. There is also joining with music. This means, you get to join their musical conversation. You become excited, calm, gloomy, fanatical, sad, or just very content from their musical stories. The author says, “Ideally, a 10 minute piece sounds like a four-minute piece.” Once you start conversing with music, you wouldn’t realize how fast the time has passed. This is just like talking with someone you love. The time goes always too fast, and you want to hang on to every second. You don’t want the magical moments to be ended. Once you get the taste of simplicity of feelings in classical music, you would love and appreciate every second of listening to the music.

Effects of video games

People believe that video games as good influence on children’s behavior. Yet, video games influence bad behavior. It causes unhealthy, breaking the social life, and increasing aggressive. First of all, video games have bad effects on children’s health. Children may spend less time their activities, such as, sports and exercises. For example, children would be obesity and skeletal disorder. Because, they do not have enough exercise. Secondly, too much video game playing makes children’s isolated. Children may not have time in other activities, such as, reading, talking with family and friends, and doing homework. Also, children might not study at home. Even if they are in school, they might think playing game all the time. They could not focus their studies. So, they would get a poor grade in school.
Furthermore, the effect on children's health and their increased isolation are not the only effect of video game abuse. There is also an effect on critical thinking ability. Which means, video games may be more conducive to children’s aggression than obediently; Children who play more violent video games are more likely to have increased aggressive thoughts and feelings. Those mean, they could confuse between the reality and fantasy. They might watch people with anger, sadness, and fear. It could cause killings, shootings, and stabbing. Also, they would not respect the people. For example, when playing games, they could pick up the bad languages. So, they would use bad words. Eventually, video games could influence on children’s behavior and cause wrong mind.

violent video games

People believe that video games as good influence on children’s behavior. Yet, video games influence bad behavior. It causes unhealthy, breaking the social life, and increasing aggressive. First of all, video games have bad effects on children’s health. Children may spend less time their activities, such as, sports. For example, children would be obesity and skeletal disorder. Because, they do not have enough exercise. Secondly, too much video game playing makes children’s isolated. Children may not have time in other activities, such as, reading, talking with family and friends, and doing homework. Also, children might not study at home. Even if they are in school, they might think playing game all the time. They could not focus their studies. So, they would get a poor grade in school.
Furthermore, above the reasons will cause bad things. Also there is one more reason. Video games affect entire children’s critical thinking. Which means, video games may be more conducive to children’s aggression than non-aggression; Children who play more violent video games are more likely to have increased aggressive thoughts and feelings. Those mean, they could confuse between the reality and fantasy. They might watch people with anger, sadness, and fear. It could cause killings, shootings, and stabbing. Also, they would not respect the people. For example, when playing games, they could pick up the bad languages. So, they would use bad words to other people. Eventually, video games could teach wrong things and influence on children’s behavior.

video games

People believe that video games as good influence on children’s behavior. Yet, video games influence bad behavior. It causes unhealthy, breaking the social life, and increasing aggressive. First of all, video games have bad effects on children’s health. Children may spend less time their activities, such as, sports. For example, children would be obesity and skeletal disorder. Because, they do not have enough exercise. Secondly, too much video game playing makes children’s isolated. Children may not have time in other activities, such as, reading, talking with family and friends, and doing homework. Also, children might not study at home. Even if they are in school, they might think playing game all the time. They could not focus their studies. So, they would get a poor grade in school.
Furthermore, video games affect entire children’s critical thinking. Which means, video games may be more conducive to children’s aggression than non-aggression; Children who play more violent video games are more likely to have increased aggressive thoughts and feelings. Those mean, they could confuse between the reality and fantasy. They might watch people with anger, sadness, and fear. It could cause killings, shootings, and stabbing. Also, they would not respect the people. For example, when playing games, they could pick up the bad languages. So, they would use bad words to other people. Eventually, video games could teach wrong things and influence on children’s behavior.

Rewrite : Entertainment

Life is hard and difficult. People have been disappointed. So they created mixture things which are entertaining. We have variety entertainment. As a result, a lot of entertainment gives us fun and happiness to cure our lives. First of all, there is music which teaches us loving and emotional development. For example, music has special power. It includes beautiful and soft melody. When we listen to the music, we could feel warm, cozy, and happy. Also, music is gospel. It is actually touching our hearts. It is like our parent’s mind. We could know God loves through the music. Secondly, we could get accomplishment from sports. Sports are activity that is simple, and fun. For instance, when we play a sports game, we will use whole body. So we would be sweaty and feel achievement. Also, during the a sports game, we could get rid of stress. Finally we could feel refreshed. Thirdly, movies give us unbelievable imagination. For example, there is the movie Avatar which has incredible graphics. Incredible graphics give us fantastic views. We could not imagine anything before watch that. Furthermore, we could become everything that we want in the movie. It can help dreams come true. We could imagine outer space, flying, eating their food, and even falling love with aliens. Therefore, variety of entertainment gives us pleasure and happiness to change our lives and environment.

variety entertainments

We have variety entertainments. A lot of entertainments give us happiness. First of all, music teaches us loving. For example, music is really beautiful, soft, and powerful. When we listen the music, we could feel warm, cozy, and happy. Also, music is gospel. It is really touching our heart. We could be known God’s love. Secondly, we would get accomplishment from sport. Sport is activity, simple, and funny. For instance, Olympic athlete player wants to get a good record, so he or she tries to keep practice again and again. Finally as they get a good record and gold medal, they would feel achievement. We could not explain about that.Thirdly, movie gives us unbelievable imagination. We could become everything what I want in the movie. It is dreams come truth. For example, there is Avatar movie which has incredible graphic. We could imagine out of space, could fly, eat their food, and even fall in love with aliens. So, entertainment is amazing and our happiness.

Entertainment

My topic is entertainment. There are several examples. First, there is movie, which is Avatar. I really enjoyed Avatar because the graphic was like nothing else I have ever seen. Also, story is fantastic. Main characters try to save the world and fall in love each other that are differently race. It is happy ending. Secondly, I would like to watch World Cup. I could not imagine who made this game. Because of rule and pattern, it is really activity, powerful, and exciting. When the player makes the goal during the same score, it is incredible feeling which is like got electric shock. Thirdly, I would like to watch the musical, which is Gospel. It is based on the Bible. It talks about Jesus and God; why they tried to come to us, attempted to tell us, and tried to save us, using music. Also, I could feel God who is alive. He watches us and takes care of us. Finally I would know his everlasting love from his messages.

my topic

I want to introduce my topic. My topic is entertainment. Entertainment consists of any activity which provides a diversion or permits people to amuse themselves in their leisure time. Entertainment is generally passive, such as watching musical or an opera. Active form of amusement, such as playing games or sports are more considered to be recreation. For example, there is movie, which could be horror, comedy, and romantic. Music could be opera and musical. Another is sport. it could be soccer, baseball, and football.

[ Editing: You tell us what entertainment is. You define it. But that's not what I asked for. I asked you to tell us what you will write about in coming weeks. So, you might give me a couple sentences on films, another couple on sports entertainment, and another couple sentences on games or musicals. You would give me specific examples of what you might say about these topics. "I really enjoyed Madame Butterfly because the music was like nothing else I have ever experienced." This NAMES a particular example (of an opera) and TELL US WHY you are writing and what you think. I want your opinion, not facts I could look up in Wikipedia.)

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